I needed this: (copy/pasted from a feedback email)
Greetings! This is a great story line. I hope that the folks at blizzard will not only read it but give you a job! Your characters are very interesting and I love your take on the respective leaders of the alliance and horde. You write well enough that I think you could write for blizzard and their pg setting. What I am saying is it's your story and characters that hooked me more than the sex. Keep up the good work do not get discouraged . I hope you get published one day and make a mint doing it.
I printed it out and stuck it on my desk ^.^