Alright, as you should all know by now, I'm working on this novel. In some ways the progress is slow, because I have a bad habit of getting hung up on things.
Right now I am stuck on a transition.
I was hoping that maybe a few of my reader types would look at it and throw ideas or suggestions at me. I would give you a link to my stash to read and you can give me input.
Good, bad, indifferent. it all helps.
The scene transition is basically, after a conversation, a scene set up I guess, my character sits around before going to bed. She wakes up again and it's a bit of time later (not the next day, there's no reason to give a day by day at this transition).
My husband says it's confusing and he didn't see it as even a next day, he thought it was still part of the previous day, and even reading it again he doesn't see how I turn it into "a couple of weeks later".
I've read it and read it and read it, and I just can't fix it. So maybe someone can throw a few things at me?